Angie, I have highlighted in red the words I believe we need to take out or change. |
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| I would take out once again | |
| which will be | |
| at these great rates is the same as Discounted rates on the next line. | |
| Also, t maybe should read just Take advantage | |
| I just moved things around some so that there is not as much wording about the rates. | |
| Oh! and check the dates of the show - I think it begins on the 5th. | |